"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Tuatara at Mangonui School and my teacher is Ms Lloyd
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
Bahlee, what an awesome story! You have done an amazing job at painting a picture with your adjectives. Don't forget to reread your work and have a think about where your full stops need to be. Keep up the good work Bahlee. Very impressive.
Bahlee, what an awesome story! You have done an amazing job at painting a picture with your adjectives. Don't forget to reread your work and have a think about where your full stops need to be. Keep up the good work Bahlee. Very impressive.
ReplyDeleteCool story Bahlee, I love the background you've put in as well. Did you enjoy doing this?
ReplyDeleteGreat imagination Bahlee ... your story had so much detail that I could visualise it. I'm positive that you are going to be a famous author.
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