"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Tuatara at Mangonui School and my teacher is Ms Lloyd
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
That was a fun piece of writing Bahlee - it made me smile and laugh AND had me hooked from the very beginning - well done ! I loved how you used your punctuation, including several elipsis (eg., ...) - oops, I can't spell it. I am always using elipsis in my writing and comments. I also loved the onomatopoeia - that really enhanced your writing ! Keep up this amazing mahi Bahlee !!
That was a fun piece of writing Bahlee - it made me smile and laugh AND had me hooked from the very beginning - well done ! I loved how you used your punctuation, including several elipsis (eg., ...) - oops, I can't spell it. I am always using elipsis in my writing and comments. I also loved the onomatopoeia - that really enhanced your writing ! Keep up this amazing mahi Bahlee !!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool story and pic Bahlee love your imagination.
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