"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Tuatara at Mangonui School and my teacher is Ms Lloyd
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
Bahlee, I have to ask this question ... Did you write this amazing story, or was it part of another story that you personalized ? It is a wonderful piece of writing and you have used so many adjectives to make it more interesting. And I loved the punctuation you have used where necessary. Your imagination is incredible ... will there be another chapter for me to read ? I'm interested to know why you choose Paris as the city from where the secret spy comes from ?
Bahlee, I have to ask this question ... Did you write this amazing story, or was it part of another story that you personalized ? It is a wonderful piece of writing and you have used so many adjectives to make it more interesting. And I loved the punctuation you have used where necessary. Your imagination is incredible ... will there be another chapter for me to read ? I'm interested to know why you choose Paris as the city from where the secret spy comes from ?
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